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Academic IELTS Writing task 1 Sample 18 – The graph below shows the Alcohol-related deaths in 7 different countries and the average beer consumption

The graph below shows the alcohol-related deaths in 7 different countries and the average beer consumption in 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the description of the correlation of the table that follows.

» Write at least 150 words.

Alcohol-related deaths and beer consumptions in 2005

Sample Answer 1: 
The table data shows the alcohol-related mortality in 2005 in 7 different countries and per person beer consumption in these countries in 2002. Overall, the most alcohol-related deaths were in the Czech Republic in 2005 while the average beer consumption there was also the highest. Death from alcohol intake was more prevalent among men than that of women.

More than 5 million people departed in 2005 from the alcohol intake in the given seven countries and it was significantly higher among men. There is a connection between the per capita beer consumption with the death from alcohol-related problems.

In the Czech Republic, on an average, each citizen drank 132 litres beer in 2005 and that caused the highest number of alcohol-related death in this country (about 1,36,9000 death). German consumed the second highest amount of beer and it caused the second highest death in this country which was about 1,185,000. Lithuanian population drank comparatively fewer litres of beers on an average and the least number of people (about 125,000) died from the alcohol-related diseases there. Austria, Ireland, Canada and  Estonia had comparatively higher alcohol consumption and higher death rates from alcohol.

Interestingly the alcohol-related death in Canada was higher than the Estonia and Lithuania though Canadian people consumes comparatively less quantity of beers than the latter two countries. Finally, the percentage of females who died from alcohol-related problems was lower than their male counterparts.

 

Model Answer 2: 
The provided table data outlines per capita beer consumption and deaths from alcohol intake in seven different countries. Overall, the higher the alcohol consumption was in a country, the higher the mortality rate was there and death cases among men were more prevalent than that of females.

In details, average beer consumption in the Czech Republic was the highest in 2002, 132 litres per person, and the alcohol-related death count was also the maximum in this country in 2005. Around 1.37 million Czechs died from alcohol-related complexities in 2005 and 0.9 million of them were men. Per capita beer consumption in Germany, Austria and Ireland were almost similar, 107, 106 and 104 litres respectively and death tolls from alcohol intake in these countries were also higher. Around 1.1, 0.91 and 0.58 million people from these countries departed due to their alcohol issues and the number of deceased males was significantly higher than that of females. The lowest beer intake could be observed in Canada, 86 litres per person in a year, but the number of Canadians died from alcohol-related problem was higher than that of Estonia and Lithuania. 125 thousand Lithuanians died of alcohol-caused problems of which only 13000 were females.

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